How Fiction Mirrors Real Manipulation
Spoilers ahead!
Content Warning: This blog post contains sensitive content, such as psychological abuse, manipulation and cult indoctrination. Reader discretion is advised. By continuing to read, you acknowledge that Michael H. Ritterhouse is not responsible for your individual emotional response to the content. I am not an expert in this field and this post represents my interpretation of research I have done and may or may not be accurate at the time of this posting or at any point in the future.
In my novel The Long Walk Home: When the Power Dies, a chilling section unfolds at Heavenly Ranch and Farm, a fictional community southeast of Steamboat Springs. When I first wrote it, I had no specific location in mind—just a vague, made-up place spun from imagination. As I mapped out Tommy’s journey, I pinned it somewhere on paper, but Heavenly Ranch remains a creation woven from whole cloth. Its leaders, Carl Albert and Emmy, are composites inspired by people I’ve read about, seen in videos, or met in passing, blended with my own impressions.
Here’s the twist: I didn’t set out to write a cult. I aimed for creepiness and manipulation, but every editor and reader who reviewed this section came back with the same feedback: “Those cult scenes hit hard.” That got me thinking—how did a story I wrote without a cult in mind end up feeling so real? Let’s dive into that.
A Lifelong Fascination with Cults
Cults have gripped my imagination since childhood. From the Jonestown Massacre to the Rajneesh Movement and Heaven’s Gate, I was a cultural rubbernecker, both fascinated and horrified by their strangeness. What drove their leaders? What pulled followers in? These questions gnawed at me.
My only real brush with a cult came as a sophomore at the University of Texas at Austin. Members of Zendik Farm, a group that had recently relocated from California, frequented Guadalupe Street near the West Mall by the Student Union or across from the University Co-op. They sold self-published magazines and CDs, pitching their movement’s ideals. Skeptical by nature, I kept my distance but later researched them. My instincts were spot-on: Zendik Farm has been described as an “environmentalist sex cult” led by Wulf Zendik and his wife, Arol. It dissolved months after Arol’s death in 2012.
The Mechanics of a Cult
Cults come in many forms, but their tactics often overlap. Psychology Today outlines key techniques:
- Recruitment, not choice: No one joins a cult; they’re drawn in through systematic social influence.
- Deception and control: Destructive cults use undue influence to foster dependency and obedience.
- Narcissistic leadership: Cult leaders, often malignant narcissists, demand unwavering loyalty.
- Not all influence is bad: There’s a line between persuasion and manipulation, and cults cross it.
In The Long Walk Home, Carl Albert and Emmy embody these traits. They’re narcissists who exploit a grid collapse—a societal catastrophe that leaves people vulnerable. As fear grips the region, they recruit locals and drifters like Tommy and Charley, offering safety in exchange for loyalty. Their assistants and a pair of young recruits amplify the eerie atmosphere, but it’s Carl Albert’s hunger for power that drives the group.
Echoes of Jonestown and Love Bombing
One haunting detail? The “blue drink” served at a communal meal. Charley, ever distrustful, avoids it, later revealing it was laced with a drug. I didn’t consciously model this after Jonestown’s mass suicide, but the parallel is uncanny. It’s a stark reminder of how cults weaponize trust.
Carl Albert and Emmy also use “love bombing” to reel Tommy in. This manipulative tactic—showering someone with flattery, attention, or gifts to gain control—hooks him at first. He’s flattered by their offer to become their “spare” son, a stand-in for their own children, who are stranded in New York and London. Special privileges and secret knowledge make him feel chosen. But the shine fades fast. The ranch’s perfection feels staged, and his isolation from others breeds unease. When Tommy rejects their offer, Carl Albert and Emmy turn vicious, publicly humiliating him.
Charley, meanwhile, stays sharp. Nursing injuries from earlier in the story, he avoids indoctrination and rescues Tommy the next morning. This act mirrors Tommy’s earlier first aid to Charley, closing a loop and deepening their bond forged on the road to Steamboat.
Red Flags of a Cult
Bethune-Cookman University offers a checklist of cult characteristics, many of which play out at Heavenly Ranch:
- Isolation and punishment: Members are cut off, and leaving is penalized.
- Blind loyalty: Leaders demand absolute devotion.
- Authoritarianism: There’s no accountability, only control.
- Fear of the outside: The world is painted as dangerous or evil.
- No room for doubt: Questions are forbidden, and the leader is always right.
As Reflection From The Roots puts it, “The need to belong is wired into us… But when that need meets a culture of isolation, power, and control? It becomes a weapon.” Cults thrive in crises, preying on people whose defenses are down. They start small, then escalate demands, trapping followers in a web of obligation.
Escaping the Trap
Tommy and Charley’s intuition saves them. They sense something’s off with Carl Albert, Emmy, and Heavenly Ranch, escaping to continue their journey. But what if you or someone you know is entangled in a real cult? Here’s what to do:
- Research thoroughly: Learn the group’s history and tactics.
- Seek professional help: Consult a mental health professional, ideally a cult specialist. If none are available, a psychiatrist, psychologist, or counselor can guide you.
- Approach with care: Modern interventions avoid heavy-handed “deprogramming” in favor of mediations or guided conversations. These require expertise, so don’t go it alone.
A Story That Resonates
Writing Heavenly Ranch wasn’t about crafting a cult—it was about exploring human vulnerability and resilience. Yet its cult-like undertones struck a chord with readers, reflecting the real-world allure and danger of such groups. Tommy and Charley’s escape is a testament to trusting your gut, a lesson that resonates far beyond the page.
What do you think—have you encountered a group that gave you cult vibes? Share your thoughts below, and let’s keep the conversation going!


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